改版翻唱back at one 经michael jackson导师bobby taylor亲自点拨

queen830601

It's undeniable that we should be together It's unbelievable how I used to say that I'd fall never The basis is need to know, if you don't know just how I feel Then let me show you now that I'm for real If all things in time, time will reveal Chorus: One, you're like a dream come true Two, just wanna be with you Three, girl it's plain to see That you're the only one for me And four, repeat steps one through three Five, make you fall in love with me If ever I beleive my work is done Then I'll start back at one So incredible, the way things work themselves out And all emotional once you know what it's all about And undesirable for us to be apart I never would have made it very far Cause you know you've got the keys to my heartChorus One, you're like a dream come true Two, just wanna be with you Three, girl it's plain to see That you're the only one for me And four, repeat steps one through three Five, make you fall in love with me If ever I beleive my work is done Then I'll start back at one Say farewell to the dark of night I see the coming of the sun I feel like a little child Whose life has just begun You came and breathed new life into this lonely heart of mine You threw out the lifeline just in the nick of timeChorus One, you're like a dream come true Two, just wanna be with you Three, girl it's plain to see That you're the only one for me And four, repeat steps one through three Five, make you fall in love with me If ever I beleive my work is done Then I'll start back at one 此歌词是由网友Rige制作的。http://rige.at.china.com

156782763

虽然没听出来哪点有点拨的痕迹。
楼主的英语发音还要改进。唱功也要还进步，有鼻音。

Domian

抱歉我还没完整听完就开始写回复
不过我是感觉LZ选错歌了
个人意见 我不觉得这首歌适合你~

MesC

the jackson 5的导师啊.
如果lz是拜师bobby taylor那真是不错. 他是唱法上替你做了修改吗?
这个编排听着很舒服, 伴奏和伴唱也很好.
个人愚见觉得lz应该在声音韵味多去抓一下感觉. 而且有点硬. 放松点就好了. :D
我也要和lz一起加油加油. :)

arthur_7x

我在想他们怎么点拨~~

yubin8178

我在想他们怎么点拨~~

睎睎

看来我要同上了。。。。。。。。编曲倒是很有意思

mouson1984

同意xixi，的确编曲很棒呢！

energyzhang

这歌编的很强大啊！~楼主可否分享下伴奏呢？？？

honghaihuai

确实唱出了另一种味道，我喜欢楼主的尾音处理~~
假如楼主英文发音能再地道点，会更好
个人愚见  谨慎参考~