这么爽的英式rap都没人翻?Written in the stars-Tinie Tempah(feat. Eric Turner)

Eggdanny

大半年前就准备录了一点点....就一直拖着
大半年之后
发现
做人不半途而废了
做事不能拖拉了
歌也慢慢捡起来录完了.....

Written In The Stars
(feat. Eric Turner)

[Eric Turner:]
Oh written in the stars
A million miles away
A message to the main
Oh
Seasons come and go
But I will never change
And I'm on my way

[Tinie Tempah - verse 1:]
Lets go...
Yeah
You're listening now
They say they ain't heard nothing like this in a while
That's why they play my song on so many different dials
'Cause I got more fucking hits than a disciplined child
When they see me everybody brrrrrap's, brrrrrraps
Man I'm like a young gun fully black barrack
I cried tear drops over the massive attack
I only make hits like I work with a racket and bat
Look at my jacket and hat
So damn berserk
So down to earth
I'm bringing gravity back
Adopted by the major I want my family back
People work hard just to get all their salary taxed
Look I'm just a writer from the ghetto like Malorie Blackman
Where the hell's all the sanity at, damn
I used to be the kid that no one cared about
That's why you have to keep screaming til they hear you out

[chorus:]
Oh written in the stars
A million miles away
A message to the main
Oh
Seasons come and go
But I will never change
And I'm on my way

[Tinie Tempah - verse 2:]
Yeah, I needed a change
When we ate we never took because we needed a change
I needed a break
For a sec I even gave up believing and praying
I even done illegal stuff and was leaded astray
They say money is the root to the evilest ways
But have you ever been so hungry it keeps you awake
Mate, now my hunger would leave them amazed
Great, it feels like a long time coming, fam
Since the day I thought of that cunning plan
One day I had a dream I tried to chase it
But I wasn't going nowhere, running man!
I knew that maybe someday I would understand
Trying change a tenner to a hundred grand
Everyones a kid that no-one cares about
You just gotta keep screaming until they hear you out

[chorus:]
Oh written in the stars
A million miles away
A message to the main
Oh
Seasons come and go
But I will never change
And I'm on my way [x2]

liyinkan

wow ....... 楼主碉堡了。这rap相当靠谱啊。

owencao

一度非常喜欢这歌

日番谷东狮郎

回复 11# Eggdanny
哈哈过奖了，对自己喜欢的歌会仔细去听一下，稍微提点拙见

Eggdanny

效果做得不错，副歌里way的尾音再多转一个弯就更赞了，RAP词熟练一点会更好
日番谷东狮郎 发表于 2011-12-17 11:52

    哈哈 谢谢这么用心的指点 以后会改进的 你貌似真的是rap达人啊 有rap必有你

日番谷东狮郎

效果做得不错，副歌里way的尾音再多转一个弯就更赞了，RAP词熟练一点会更好

妖精的旋律

高潮部分让我震惊，非常好。RAp也不错，发音和节奏感再强些就无敌了  赞

Eggdanny

非常棒！我完全没听出来是翻唱...还专门去找了原唱才确认。
darknessfalls 发表于 2011-12-15 18:55

    过奖了呵呵

忧郁的蓝调@

太赞了 喜欢这个调调！等着听你新作品啊~

darknessfalls

非常棒！我完全没听出来是翻唱...还专门去找了原唱才确认。