【大家快来踩呀！】多提意见~Standing Still~，！！！！！！快来吼吼啊！！！！！！！！！！

jeffandrewlee

还是我好友的歌，老歌了，电脑前录滴，不会做效果呀 ，就随便用cool edit搞了一下，希望大家将就着听啊，觉得好的也顶下吗，不好也留点意见吗    

cuttin' through the darkest night in my two headlights
trying to keep it clear, but i'm losing it here to the twilight
there's a dead end to my left, there's a burning bush to my right
you aren't in sight, you aren't in sight

do you want me, like i want you?
or am i standing still, beneath the darkened sky?
or am i standing still, with the scenery flying by?
or am i standing still, out of the corner of my eye?
was that you passing me by?

mothers on the stoop, boys in souped-up coupes on this hot summer night
between fight and flight is the blind man's sight and the choice that's right
i roll the window down, feel like i'm gonna drown in this strange town
feel broken down, i feel broken down

do you need me, like i need you?
or am i standing still, beneath the darkened sky?
or am i standing still, with the scenery flying by?
or am i standing still, out of the corner of my eye?
was that you passing me by?

sweet sorrow is the call tomorrow
sweet sorrow is the call tomorrow

do you love me, like i love you?
or am i standing still, beneath the darkened sky?
or am i standing still, with the scenery flying by?
or am i standing still, out of the corner of my eye?
was that you passing me by?

are you passing me by?(passing me by)
do you want me?(passing me by)
do you need me, like i need you too?
and do you want me, like i want you?
are you passing me by?

jeffandrewlee

回复 13# Domian

谢谢支持哈。不是原创，呵呵呵，也谢谢你的意见哟~~·

Domian

来支持一下 原创的么？ 感觉挺好
稍微有一点点个人感觉：歌词倒是很有时下流行的”吸血鬼“意境～旋律也挺平缓 不过mm的人声还是感觉少了点rock的力道，能多一点力度会不会更好点？
纯个人感觉 说错了吾怪哈～～
人工置顶一下

liro

这女声好干净~```````````

jeffandrewlee

回复 4# royozhong


    谢谢你的意见，我会告诉她叫她注意的，thanks

jeffandrewlee

回复 6# 爱依范

谢谢支持，呵呵呵

Erica

回复 8# jeffandrewlee


    嗯嗯

jeffandrewlee

回复 5# Erica

谢谢呀，是有点不稳，呵呵，估计离话筒太近了，这不是我的歌，我的好友的，我现在在准备考研究生，都没时间录歌，谢谢你支持，以后常走动！

xuyi

唱得不错的所，支持一次啊，呵呵呵

爱依范

唱的不错，顶顶