I'm yours

prerogative

Jason Mraz的歌
就录了一遍，改了两个地方
对这首歌有好感的进来捧个场哈，谢谢

azurelucid

Jason是我的大爱，呵呵，对这首歌超级有好感～～
lz唱的另一种风格啊，呵呵，感觉还要多熟悉下 ：）

superman20

首先，曲子还不是完全很熟悉，所以好多地方的调子跑了。。。。
其次，声音好闷，压着嗓子唱的么？
然后，很多地方的发音不标准，亦或者说就是发音太中式了、不地道。还有部分地方的句子连读的准确性也有待提高。
最后，有一句词错了，貌似是a la peace a melody而不是we just a big fammily

维维LEE

0.0 ls的好苛刻 不过也很直接 说的很对
哈哈 慢慢来咯 要进步哦~其实这首歌曲 熟悉了就不难拉~

akagoods

感觉。。。。还是要熟悉了歌再去唱。。。。个人意见

七宝

感觉很棒 继续 超这方向走  嘎嘎 顶

azurelucid

3楼的，Jason唱的就是"We're just one big family”，没有错！ 呵呵 ：）

myyaoxia

只能说有待提高啊= =

prerogative

首先，曲子还不是完全很熟悉，所以好多地方的调子跑了。。。。
其次，声音好闷，压着嗓子唱的么？
然后，很多地方的发音不标准，亦或者说就是发音太中式了、不地道。还有部分地方的句子连读的准确性也有待提高。
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superman20 发表于 2009-3-18 17:08

好多地方调子跑了不能苟同，有几处音准有问题那倒是，不过没时间，懒得改了
另外你说的那个歌词，是你自己弄错了吧？
评论前还是自己熟悉下歌比较好

superman20

jason mraz第一次唱那句的时候的确是a la peaceful melody，很多网站上的歌词都是we're just one big family,一开始我没听之前也以为是，结果仔细听了后jason的确唱的是a la peaceful melody，第二次唱这句的时候是a la one big fammily，第三次唱的那句是A lá happy fammily，最后一次唱的是a la peaceful melody。
第一次唱这句的前一句你也错了，是Listen to the music of the moment maybe sing with me，不是dance and sing，第二次唱这句的前一句是Listen to the music of the moment come and dance with me然后是A lá one big family。
很多网站甚至包括英文网站上的歌词都是错的！只有极个别的网站上的歌词是对的，然后看jason的现场视频也是这样唱的。
我建议你还是仔细听听jason这几个地方的歌词是什么吧。除非这歌还有另外的版本？
还有调子跑了的意思不就是音准有问题么，又仔细听了你唱的，可能我说的“好多地方”有错，应该说“一些地方”，不好意思。
另回azurelucid：
那里的歌词的确jason没有唱we're just one big family,一直是a la peaceful melody，第二段的时候有唱a la one big fammily。然后末尾还是a la peaceful melody的，呵呵

歌词：
Well you done done me and you bet I felt it
I tried to be chill but you're so hot that I melted
I fell right through the cracks
and now I'm trying to get back
Before the cool done run out
I'll be giving it my best test
Nothing's going to stop me but divine intervention
I reckon it's again my turn to win some or learn some

I won't hesitate no more, no more
It cannot wait, I'm yours

Well open up your mind and see like me
Open up your plans and damn you're free
Look into your heart and you'll find love love love
Listen to the music of the moment maybe sing with me
A lá peaceful melody
It's your God-forsaken right to be loved love loved love loved

So I won't hesitate no more, no more
It cannot wait I'm sure
There's no need to complicate
Our time is short
This is our fate, I'm yours

I've been spending way too long checking my tongue in the mirror
And bending over backwards just to try to see it clearer
My breath fogged up the glass
And so I drew a new face and laughed
I guess what I'ma saying is there ain't no better reason
To rid yourself of vanity and just go with the seasons
It's what we aim to do
Our name is our virtue

I won't hesitate no more, no more
It cannot wait I'm sure
There's no need to complicate
Our time is short
this is our fate, I'm yours

Well no no, well open up your mind and see like me
Open up your plans and damn you're free
Look into your heart and you'll find love love love
Listen to the music of the moment come and dance with me
A lá one big family ( 2rd time: A lá happy fammily；3rd time: A lá peaceful melody)
It's your God-forsaken right to be loved love love love

I won't hesitate no more, no more
It cannot wait, I'm sure
There's no need to complicate
Our time is short
This is our fate, I'm yours