√feel good inc

sharp46

Hahahahahahahahahahahaha
feel good (x 9)
City's breaking down on a camel's back.
They just have to go 'cos they don’t know wack
So all you fill the streets it's appealing to see
You wont get undercounted, 'cos you're bad and free
You've got a new horizon It's ephermal style.
A melancholy town where we never smile.
And all I wanna hear is the message beep.
My dreams, they've got to kiss,
because I don’t get sleep, no...

Windmill, Windmill for the land.
Turn forever hand in hand
Take it all in on your stride
It is sticking, falling down
Love forever love is free
Let's turn forever you and me
Windmill, windmill for the land
Is everybody in?

Laughing gas these hazmats, fast cats,
Lining them up-a like ass cracks,
Ladies, homies, at the track
its my chocolate attack.
Shit, I'm stepping in the heart of this here
Care bear bumping in the heart of this here
watch me as I gravitate
hahahahahahaa.
Yo, we gonna go ghost town,
this motown,
with yo sound
you're in the place
you gonna bite the dust
can’t fight with us
With yo sound
you kill the INC.
so dont stop, get it, get it
until you're cheddar header.
Yo, watch the way I navigate
Hahahahahahahahaa

Windmill, Windmill for the land.
Turn forever hand in hand
Take it all in on your stride
It is sticking, falling down
Love forever love is free
Let's turn forever you and me
Windmill, windmill for the land
Is everybody in?

Dont stop, get it, get it
we are your captains in it (feel good)
steady,watch me navigate,
ahahahahahhaa. (feel good)
Dont stop, get it, get it
we are your captains in it (feel good)
steady, watch me navigate (feel good)


大家给点意见吧。

[ 本帖最后由 Billie.J 于 2007-5-7 00:20 编辑 ]

sharp46

汗    原来跑调严重啊，我会继续努力，谢谢大家。

showhurry

:L :L :L
没听过原版..........
所以,把LZ当原创来听拉~~~
这样的话,这首歌还是有点独特风味的哈~
加油加油 :haha:

Billie.J

虽然这歌有好多人翻过，但是除于个人喜好，每次一看到有人翻这歌还是第一时间冲进来听，哈哈。。。听完后，简单说说：第一段主音部分严重跑调，完全不在调上；RAP部分比较有激情，不过激情有余，表达不足，有些词尾的衔接不太连贯，笑声部分比较僵硬；第2段的主音部分好象跑调现象有所好转，基本压在了原调上，RAP的节奏感有所下降。
总的来说，LZ还有很大的进步空间，继续努力哈~~~支持新人~~

Gabe914

好像有一个严重的问题，LZ唱的那部分（非说唱）调子和伴奏不是一个调，如果我没有听错的话。
不过说唱还是挺厉害的。

四喜

蛮长时间没看到你了.
哈哈哈,没想到今天一来就看到你发的新歌.
不管,先抢个沙发在说.
歌嘛暂时还没听到.估计是网速问题.
那我只能耐心的等一下了.