√[翻唱]craig david world filled with love 第二次

huhuhahahaha

重唱了一次,肯定比上一次好啦
希望大家多提建议

Saw some pictures in the paper,
of a girl I'd met the day before.
I couldn't believe that hours later,
I had reporters knockin at my door,
But I used to dream about,
the life I'm living now and,
I didn't think I'd miss those things from the past,
and I'm not afraid of leaving,
or letting go of what I had,
cause I realize that now there's no turning back.

Cause I'm a young heart living in a world filled with love,
so when tear drops fall from me like rain from above,
I can brush my troubles away,
know that deep down inside,
I got sun shining in my life.

I used to think I could get better,
my girlfriends always used to get me wrong.
Some just sent messages, love letters,
but those kinda feelings never lasted long.
Cause now the only love I find's within a castle made of sand,
and when the tide goes out it's swept away.
Though I got my peace of mind,
and time is firmly on my side,
and through the battles I can safely say...

(Music Break)
Cause I mean I'm a young heart living in a world filled with love,
so when tear drops fall from me like rain from above,
I can brush my troubles away,
know that deep down inside,
I got sun shining in my life.
I'm caught living in a world filled with love,
so when tear drops fall from me like rain from above,
I can brush my troubles away,
know that deep down inside,
I got sun shining in my life.


END

[ Last edited by wooohu on 2006-9-22 at 19:36 ]

Ability

既然你说你是唱着玩玩的,那也不必多评点些什么.
1、嗓音还不错。
2、歌唱技巧还是一般，这是由于你糟糕的发音所至。
3、先把自己的作品去掉伴奏听一下，自己觉得跟原唱差的不太多了之后再发上来，有助于提高水平。
另一首在下也听了一下，存在同样的问题，请足下好好斟酌斟酌吧。

huhuhahahaha

楼上的老大，　能不能教教我怎么更好发音啊？　我没学过，　能不能给个链接什么的？　我没开玩笑哦，　呵呵
别的朋友有什么建议也可以告诉我啊

[ Last edited by huhuhahahaha on 2006-9-21 at 16:54 ]

yx

楼主，还是支持先
他的歌都是表面轻松但演唱很难
你的嗓音还是不错，加油练练

nicholasyj

黑眼豆豆 My Humps有下的地方么?
我很喜欢那首歌.想找伴奏

wooohu

呀~~我觉得还可以啦！~~
可以尝试一下非RNB的歌曲~~ 嘿嘿~~都好听的啦~~
  嗓子可以再放轻松点~~嘎嘎 ！！支持哇~~

rnbboy

已经算不错的了  呵呵~支持一下

妃·我莫属

Craig David的歌确实很难唱，不过我也超喜欢他。但是我觉得有些东西是在骨子里的。就像他，血液里流淌着RNB的细胞。楼主唱的时候好像有点紧张，每个字扣太紧了。

jasonlau

这歌很难唱
LZ不错了 继续努力!!